Tuesday, February 21, 2012

Unnecessary Words

Really (1)    Removed (1)
Just     (3)    Removed (1)

Passive Voice:


I feel by using technology we can make learning history fun and make a lasting impression on the students so my digital story was geared towards this concept.

Active Voice:
I feel by using technology we can make learning history fun and make a lasting impression on the students so my digital story is geared towards this concept.

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